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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">I agree completely.&nbsp; Wyatt’s greater contribution to this line of poems is, I think, “They Flee from me.”
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Louis Schwartz<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Phone:&nbsp; (804) 289-8315<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>On Behalf Of </b>Richard A. Strier<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, April 15, 2016 12:31 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> John Milton Discussion List<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Milton-L] awkwardness<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Yes. I mentioned
<i>Rime</i> 190 because I think Milton's poem is indeed related to it -- and, even more amazingly, given how great Petrarch's poem is -- worthy of comparison to it. &nbsp;Wyatt's sonnet based on 190 (&quot;Whoso list to hunt&quot;) is a fine poem, but not (in my opinion)
 in the same league with Petrarch's -- and Milton's.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<b>Sent:</b> Friday, April 15, 2016 11:23 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> John Milton Discussion List<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Milton-L] awkwardness</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Thank you, Richard!&nbsp; It is a very great poem, and I think it’s not only comparable to
<i>Rime</i> 190, but also related to it, or at least in a line of poems that call back to it and beyond through a long line of appearing and disappearing beloveds.&nbsp; I’ve argued elsewhere and at length the at Milton’s particularly painful reflection on the motif
 is primarily a response to Spenser’s—part of why “espoused” matters so much here.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">Michael:&nbsp; you’re right, of course, about the warmth that accompanies the bookishness of the Alcestis allusion, and about the purification simile, which reflects
 back not just to Leviticus, but to Mary’s purification in Luke, to churching customs, which also suggest the reunion of mother and community of worship, as well as, as you note, the reunion of spouses—it’s also typologically relevant in uniting Old and New
 Testaments, key to the structure Spitzer long ago noticed, and for that matter it even suggests a conflation of the names of the two possible wives—if we want to read the poem biographically (Mary suggesting Mary and purification suggesting Katherine).&nbsp; Talk
 about packing a lot of information into a few syllables!</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">===========================</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">University of Richmond</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">28 Westhampton Way</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Richmond, VA&nbsp; 23173</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Office:&nbsp; Ryland Hall 308</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Phone:&nbsp; (804) 289-8315</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#1F497D">Email:&nbsp; <a href="mailto:lschwart@richmond.edu" target="_blank">
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<a href="mailto:milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu">milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu</a> [<a href="mailto:milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu">mailto:milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu</a>]
<b>On Behalf Of </b>Richard A. Strier<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, April 15, 2016 11:58 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> John Milton Discussion List<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Milton-L] awkwardness</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Arial&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">Lovely work, Louis! &nbsp;It's a very great poem. &nbsp;One of the greatest sonnets in English that I think we have. &nbsp;Worthy of comparison with some of Petrarch's greatest,
 perhaps even <i>Rime</i> 190, (<i>Una candida cerva</i>). </span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu" target="_blank">milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu</a> [milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu] on behalf of Schwartz, Louis [lschwart@richmond.edu]<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, April 15, 2016 10:37 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> John Milton Discussion List<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Milton-L] awkwardness</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="color:black">You're absolutely right that every line doesn't have to sing. In fact, part of what I find beautiful in this poem is the way it&nbsp;swings between poles of lyricism and something at least on the surface flatter&nbsp;and slightly strained.
 &nbsp;And you're right that&nbsp;the diction and the similes are&nbsp;oddly bookish, although I wouldn't call them&nbsp;&quot;chilly.&quot;&nbsp; I think you're right that one way to look at it is as the representation of a strategy to contain the emotions, but I also think it's the representation
 of someone trying to communicate a very complex meaning that he doesn't fully grasp, and an experience that he knows was not &quot;real&quot; and yet he feels&nbsp;is full of significance (and that both makes him uneasy and full of longing). &nbsp;&nbsp;What you say about packing
 a lot of information into just a few syllables is precisely what I think is so&nbsp;artful--and peculiarly Miltonic--about the poem. &nbsp;A big part of the strange effect of the poem for me is the way those pedantic bits carry&nbsp;a straining toward meaning that has its
 own&nbsp;emotional weight, and an important part of their&nbsp;burden is in the&nbsp;allusions they make and suggest. &nbsp;And that straining is also, I think, reflected in the syntax and prosody. &nbsp;<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p><span style="color:black">I think, also, that the emphatic stresses (and the extra ones) that Milton makes available in lines 7 and 8 provide an opportunity to recite those lines with a rising urgency that carries the energy of the long sentence into its
 climax at the beginning of line 9. &nbsp;And the energy of that&nbsp;rhythm carries the mounting excitement of the speaker's trust that what he saw in the dream is a figure of what he will have again at some point. &nbsp;Then, of course, it deflates into the sad conclusion
 of the poem, lifting again with the stresses on&nbsp;&quot;love,&quot;&nbsp;&quot;sweet-,&quot; &quot;good,&quot; &quot;per-,&quot; &quot;shined,&quot;&nbsp;&quot;clear,&quot; and &quot;face&quot; before falling though the internal rhyme on &quot;embrace&quot; to the dark final line with its puzzled sequence of waking and fleeing.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Richmond, VA&nbsp; 23173<br>
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<a href="mailto:milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu" target="_blank">milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu</a> &lt;<a href="mailto:milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu" target="_blank">milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu</a>&gt; on behalf of Michael Gillum &lt;<a href="mailto:mgillum@unca.edu" target="_blank">mgillum@unca.edu</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, April 15, 2016 9:49 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> John Milton Discussion List<br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [Milton-L] awkwardness</span><span style="color:#212121"> </span>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#212121">Why does every line need to &quot;sing&quot;? Does the topic of ritual purification call for flights of lyricism? I don't see why some irregularities of rhythm turn a sonnet &quot;poor.&quot; Richardson delivers the line in a conversational
 rhythm that is not ugly, and that, I think, dimly reflects the metrical scansions offered by Leonard and me. To me, the interesting point is the way he suppresses the &quot;as whom&quot; that, being grammatically incoherent, is a genuine fault in the poem.
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#212121">The other thing I would fault is the diction in &quot;my late espoused saint,&quot; which seems a chilly and pedantic way to characterize the lady. It put me off when I first approached the poem. If I were forced to defend
 the phrase, I would say that it does pack a lot of information into a few syllables, and that this language, along with the bookishness of the similes, might be seen to reflect a strategy of containing the powerful emotion that breaks out in the last several
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="color:#212121">On Thu, Apr 14, 2016 at 9:48 PM, Schwartz, Louis &lt;<a href="mailto:lschwart@richmond.edu" target="_blank">lschwart@richmond.edu</a>&gt; wrote:</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">I hate to have to respond to this sort of assertion at all, but I'll simply say, with as much restraint as I can muster, that I do not perceive the line as a flaw (same
 with the choppiness that bothers you about&nbsp;&quot;trust to have/ Full sight of her in heaven without restraint&quot; or the whole syntactic movement from &quot;Mine&quot; to &quot;mind&quot;).&nbsp; If you would like to have an actual conversation about this, including my sense of the straining
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<p style="background:white"><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:black">For what it's worth, I don't see the point of raising a little flag in chaos.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<a href="mailto:milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu" target="_blank">milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu</a> &lt;<a href="mailto:milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu" target="_blank">milton-l-bounces@richmond.edu</a>&gt; on behalf of Gregory Machacek &lt;<a href="mailto:Gregory.Machacek@marist.edu" target="_blank">Gregory.Machacek@marist.edu</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Thursday, April 14, 2016 5:31 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> John Milton Discussion List<br>
<b>Subject:</b> [Milton-L] awkwardness</span><span style="font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#212121">
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and tell me that you don't hear, amid all the beautifully conveyed rhythms of Richardson's performance, the arrhythmia in &quot;Purification in the old law.&quot; &nbsp;Then look at, for example, Louis Schwartz's scansion-- [</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:&quot;Calibri&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#1F497D">/xx/xxx//x/]--</span><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#212121">and
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#212121">This arrythmia (and it's Milton's; Richardson has downplayed it in performance as far as it can be downplayed)
<i>matters</i>&nbsp;because the proposed beauty of this section is the suspension established with &quot;Mine&quot; and only resolved with &quot;came&quot;.&nbsp; There's scarcely anything more satisfying in English literature than the moment one of Milton's well-constructed suspended sentences
 resolves itself: &nbsp;&quot;without thee is sweet.&quot; &nbsp;But this is not one of those.&nbsp; The verbal stuff over or through which a suspension moves has to be of a certain quality.&nbsp; Here Milton does what in PL Marvell thinks he never does: &nbsp;&quot;flags,&quot; fails to keep &quot;on wing.&quot;
 &nbsp;The <i>idea</i>&nbsp;that stuff about the wife intervenes between &quot;Mine&quot; and &quot;came,&quot; delaying the &quot;came,&quot; would make for a good poem is correct; but that notion doesn't survive an actual listen.</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="background:white"><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:&quot;Verdana&quot;,&quot;sans-serif&quot;;color:#212121">There's more to be said about the content of &quot;Purification in the old law did save,&quot; but for now I'll take Jim as saying that he heard
 awkwardness here.&nbsp; Michael Gillum has called the line &quot;ragged and unmusical&quot;.&nbsp; Michael Bryson is open to the notion that this could be described as a poor poem.&nbsp; No small number of embryon atoms are swarming populous around my flag (or Johnson's, however you
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From: James Rovira <br>
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Date: 04/14/2016 03:37PM<br>
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 when read aloud rather than starting with scansion to evaluate the poem's use meter. Scanning the poem should provide the &quot;why&quot; for the &quot;what.&quot; It's at that point that we begin to hear each other's reading of the poem. &nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span style="color:black"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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 or the other) that &quot;Methought I saw&quot; is a poor sonnet.&nbsp; I think I've made the stakes for myself sufficiently demanding.&nbsp; Our era's tendency interpretively to recuperate poorly crafted verses is just a sub-issue of this larger challenge to which I've engaged
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