[Milton-L] more on fallacious
John K Leonard
jleonard at uwo.ca
Thu Apr 17 08:53:25 EDT 2014
On 04/17/14, Gregory Machacek <Gregory.Machacek at marist.edu> wrote:
> Lovemaking after the fall is exactly like lovemaking before, it's just that, I don't know, I had sorta thought it was gonna be better somehow, so . . . now I'm actually kinda disappointed by it.
Surely it was the expectation of knowledge, rather than any hope that sex would "be better somehow", that makes the fruit "fallax",
true in our fall,
False in our promised rising; since our eyes
Opened we find indeed, and find we know
Both good and evil, good lost and evil got.
Bad fruit of knowledge if this be to know,
Which leaves us naked thus, of honour void,
Of innocence, of faith, of purity. (9.1069-75)
Coming just 23 lines after "fallacious", the anadiplosis "fall, / False" is very clear as to what the fallacy was: the fallacious hope of "our promised rising". I admit that "if this be to know" has overtones of carnal knowledge, especially in such close proximity to "naked", but I don't hear any hint in these lines that Adam is disappointed to find that his bold and adventurous Eve (with or without any new felicitous embellishments) is just the same old same old ("I had sorta thought it was gonna be better somehow"). Greg's misplaced trust in the flaccid demotic only reaffirms my sense that an obscene pun would add nothing to this moment in the poem.
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