[Milton-L] Bentley's rewrite

Jeffrey Shoulson jshoulson at miami.edu
Wed Aug 2 16:11:40 EDT 2006


No, that's perfect, Angelica.  Thanks for the prompt response.
Jeffrey

Jeffrey S. Shoulson, Ph. D.
Associate Professor of English and Judaic Studies
University of Miami
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On Aug 2, 2006, at 3:03 PM, Angelica Duran wrote:

> Dear Jeffrey,
>
> That's what we are here for.  Here is is, per page 399 of the EEBO 
> version
> (Milton, John. _Milton¹s Paradise lost. A new edition, by Richard 
> Bentley_,
> D.D. London, 1732. 437pp.):
>
> 645  Some natural tears they drop'd, but wip'd them soon:
>      The World was All before them, where to choose
>      Their place of Rest; and Providence their guide :
>   *  They hand in hand with wand'ring steps and slow,
> 649  Through Eden took their solitary way.
>
>   * THEN hand in hand with SOCIAL steps their way
>     Through Eden took, WITH HEAV'NLY COMFORT CHEER'D.
>
> All the caps and spellings are correct. Tell me if you need to know 
> where
> italics are (variously in lines 648-9, both versions).
>
> Adios,
>
> Angelica Duran
> (765) 496-3957
> <duran0 at cla.purdue.edu>
>
>
>> From: Jeffrey Shoulson <jshoulson at miami.edu>
>> Reply-To: John Milton Discussion List <milton-l at lists.richmond.edu>
>> Date: Wed, 2 Aug 2006 14:54:37 -0400
>> To: John Milton Discussion List <milton-l at lists.richmond.edu>
>> Subject: [Milton-L] Bentley's rewrite
>>
>> I hate to impose upon this learned list for help in a matter that, if 
>> I
>> had proper access to a full library, I would be able to handle on my
>> own.  Since I am not right now in the position to consult such a
>> library, however, I wonder if anyone out there can send me, or point 
>> to
>> a site on the web where I can find, Bentley's awful, tone-deaf
>> rewriting on the last lines of Paradise Lost.
>> Thanks,
>> Jeffrey Shoulson
>>
>> Jeffrey S. Shoulson, Ph. D.
>> Associate Professor of English and Judaic Studies
>> University of Miami
>> PO Box 248145
>> Coral Gables, FL 33156
>>
>> (o) 305-284-5596
>> (f) 305-284-2182
>>
>> jshoulson at miami.edu
>> www.as.miami.edu/english/faculty.htm#shoulson
>>
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