[Milton-L] Milton's Heaven in 25 words or less

Michael Bryson michael.bryson at csun.edu
Mon May 18 14:59:50 EDT 2009


Yes, I think he does. I think the passage from
10.1010-46 is an excellent example of Milton's
humor. Adam's great theological inspiration, the one
in which he anticipates the "Christian" re-reading
of the Serpent and the threat Yahweh makes against
it in Genesis 3:15, is brought on--at least in
part--as a reaction to Eve's suggestion that they
either 1) go without sex for the rest of their lives
(930 years in the case of the Biblical Adam...rather
a long time, methinks...), or 2) kill themselves. It
has long struck me as both a serious and a funny
moment. Adam's ingenuity appears to stem from a
desire not to be celibate for 900+ years (and not to
commit suicide...though this is the less comic of
the two motivations). I suspect Milton is having a
bit of a wry joke here about the rather basic
motivations that underlie some (much?) "higher"
achievement and innovation.

Michael Bryson
(avoiding grading finals like his life depended on
the avoidance...)

---- Original message ----

  Date: Mon, 18 May 2009 13:31:45 -0500
  From: "Dr. Larry Gorman" <larry at eastwest.edu>
  Subject: RE: [Milton-L] Milton's Heaven in 25
  words or less
  To: "John Milton Discussion List"
  <milton-l at lists.richmond.edu>

  You think he means to be?

   

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  words or less

   

  The reference to Mel Brooks was deliberate...can't
  help myself...the
  1968 "Springtime for Hitler" remains the single
  funniest thing I have
  ever seen.

  And of course, the cringing is Satan and Gabriel
  accusing each other of
  toadying ("You were!" "No, you were!") at the end
  of book
  4. That has always struck me as a comic
  moment...thus, back to Mel Brooks...and
  what I often see as a faintly (to be grossly
  anachronistic) Busby Berkeley
  quality to some of the heaven scenes in PL and PR.
  Milton is sometimes very
  funny...

  Michael

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  Date: Mon, 18 May
  2009 14:11:30 -0400
  From: "FLANNAGAN, ROY"
  <ROY at uscb.edu>
  Subject: RE: [Milton-L] Milton's Heaven in 25
  words or less
  To: "John Milton Discussion
  List" <milton-l at lists.richmond.edu>
  >Michael: Wonderful to try the sonnet, but the
  image of dancing to the beat
  might be too close to Mel Brooks ("Springtime for
  Hitler" in The Producers,
  or "Puttin' on the Ritz" in Young Frankenstein) or
  Woody Allen
  (Mighty Aphrodite, choral scenes). I wonder what
  kind of dance Milton might have liked to dance in
  Heaven.
  The musical arrangement rings true: God must be a
  good composer, with musical
  children.
  >
  >I assume that it is the almost-bad angels who are
  doing the cringing?
  >
  >This could set off a wave of sonnets. Should we
  emend to "fourteen
  lines, unless you have a tail"?
  >
  >Roy Flannagan
  >
  >________________________________
  >
  >From: milton-l-bounces at lists.richmond.edu on
  behalf of Michael Bryson
  >Sent: Mon 5/18/2009 1:53 PM
  >To: John Milton Discussion List
  >Subject: Re: [Milton-L] Milton's
  Heaven in 25 words or less
  >
  >
  >"Milton's
  Heaven"? Where? In Paradise Lost? In DDC?
  In a constructed (by the critic) version of the
  one that presumably resided in Milton's
  imagination?
  >
  >Here's a version of the one this critic sees (and
  therefore, in some sense
  constructs) in Paradise Lost, though in sonnet
  form (thus, of necessity, more than 25 words). The
  borrowings from Milton should be all too
  obvious, but otherwise the quality (or lack
  thereof) should be entirely blamed
  on me:
  >
  >Milton's
  Heaven
  >We dance and sing, in ecstasy before
  >The throne, with distances to cringe, not fight,
  >Or fawn and cringe and servilely adore
  >Our Heaven's awful king. What but His might
  >
  >Arranges every harmony and note,
  >With choreography controlling motion
  >Of angels' dances, learning steps by rote,
  >Turn, turn, kick, turn, in chorus lines' devotion
  >
  >To mastery of the dance the Master calls?
  >What though free will may yet illusion prove,
  >Or no, but solid show as Heaven's walls?
  >What matters is the dance in which we move.
  >
  >A tyranny or liberty in show,
  >The image is ourselves, and all we'll know.
  >
  >
  >Michael Bryson
  >
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  >
  >
  > Date: Mon, 18 May 2009 13:17:54 -0400
  > From: Gregory Machacek
  <Gregory.Machacek at marist.edu>
  > Subject: [Milton-L] Milton's
  Heaven in 25 words or less
  > To: John Milton Discussion List
  <milton-l at lists.richmond.edu>
  > >The bliss of gratefully resigning one's will to
  that of a Creator who
  > >lovingly wills better things than you could
  imagine to will for
  yourself.
  > >
  > >Greg Machacek
  > >Professor of English
  > >Marist College
  > >
  > >It's the 25 word limit that makes the exercise
  fun (and challenging
  for
  > >academics!)
  > >
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