[Milton-L] milton's theodicy in haiku

Gregory Machacek Gregory.Machacek at marist.edu
Sat Oct 11 16:49:43 EDT 2008


I couldn't resist the challenge.  Two entries:

      That Good might know you
Loved Me freely, I allowed
      Your choosing evil.

More enjambment than is typical in a haiku (but, hey, that's our guy).  But
also too light on imagery, which the following partly corrects:

      From a garden's goods,
The fruit that, shunned, would show you
      Loved freely eaten.

Greg Machacek
Professor of English
Marist College



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